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1musicmom
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« on: September 05, 2016, 05:31:48 PM »

I wonder around
like a ghost in this town
living my life like a runaway stray
hopeful to find where I belong
A place to call my home one day

but there is something missing
A deep void in my life
Why do I keep dreaming of a face
Why do I keep coming back to this place
I feel nobody is listening
can anyone even see me

I wonder around
like a ghost in this town
I feel your heart
but you don't see me now
living my life like a runaway stray
hopeful to find where I belong
A place to call my home one day

Remembering a time in another life
your love was all mine
and I became your wife
what we had was stronger than most
but somehow it turned into a love overdose
Passed away in time

I wonder around
like a ghost with a frown
I can feel your heart
but you still don't see me now
living my life like a runaway train
derailed by love stricken with pain
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« Reply #1 on: September 09, 2016, 07:17:12 AM »

I think you want the word wander here.
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John M
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« Reply #2 on: January 29, 2017, 04:45:04 PM »

i like it, do you have this recorded? i started singing it over my guitar and rewrote some of it...just having fun! keep it up!

-john

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i'm the ghost of your town
just floating around
you're getting by, as i roam

i've been aiming to find
a space to reside
like the one we used to call our own

but I'm invisible 
spinning in circles
invisible to you
spinning in circles until then...

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