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melanieroses
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« on: October 02, 2016, 09:59:29 PM »

If I tell the truth I'd say that you're confusing to me
But not many other people can see directly through me
And in a way that's good cause I've always needed direction
It's hard to figure out who truly had the right intentions
Sometimes I find myself lost and missing all your affection
I guess it's time to realize I lost all your attention
Wherever I messed up
I hope we fill all of this tension
Once when love was in the air
We had different feelings to mention
Hard to separate yourself from a different dimension
Found myself stuck in denial
Was in need of an intervention
What is it we're looking for
Love, justice, equality?
Someone tell me when quantity became better than quality?
Yeah I have some faults in me
I Struggled with the flaws in me
Can't believe that sometimes I would carve my own scars onto me
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John M
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« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2017, 12:01:27 AM »

reinterpreting your lyrics...just having fun with it! thanks for sharing!

its not a lie to say that you're confusing
its not like you could even tell the difference
I'm better off without your misdirection
I'm better off without your indiscretions

there are pieces to myself that i let slip
when you had me so tightly in your grip

if ever i messed up
id hope to clear the air
it shouldn't be this difficult
to get there

was it really that different for you?
that night we made 1 out of 2
from then, i couldn't separate
i could never separate...

stuck in denial,
its my love on trial,
heavy was the verdict
how i begged you to reword it

scars make up history
they don't fade like memory
I've got some inside of me
that etch out your name












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« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2017, 11:40:59 PM »

I like your poem John.
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