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This week's words;

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Monday- Motorcycle

Tuesday- Wildflower

Wednesday- Asparagus

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Author Topic: Metaphors & Similes exercise  (Read 835 times)
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« on: October 12, 2016, 02:22:35 PM »

five minutes.. go!

this ray is like a cut of butter on a piece of dark rye

butter is cow syrup

syrup is like amber without the mosquito

she's trapped like a dinosaur footprint

bones hollow like a paper straw

straws and twigs of split ends being cut

poking like a woodpecker knock

leave me like a sneeze

lung bags are dying fish on land, wheezing in glue-y ripples
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« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2016, 04:54:27 PM »

I like "butter is cow syrup" lol.  I don't want to know what cow syrup is, but it sounds like a good punk band name. Smiley
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