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Chris Dudley
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« on: June 19, 2017, 04:53:11 AM »

Goliath rode a mammoth on the way to fight
No camel could hold the Philistine
A mammoth as shaggy as a woolly bison
A mammoth all covered with fleas.

Goliath was good at roaring, at stomping and at rage
He stood without his boots nine foot four
John Bunyan on his blue ox might spit down on his head
Goliath on his mammoth was monstrous nonetheless.

Goliath was ill tempered on account of the fleas
The fleas a mammoth could not shed
The fleas bit Goliath up down his legs
Made him roar in the morning when he got out of bed.

Goliath was susceptible to tiny things
The fleas were just one on the list
One day the mammoth took fright at a little mouse
Threw Goliath right on his head.

So Goliath had a soft head and fleas and a date with fate
When he roared for the Philistines
He laughed at little David twirling his sling
And died in the dust from a stone.

Goliath rode a mammoth on the way to fight
No camel could hold the Philistine
A mammoth as shaggy as a woolly bison
A mammoth all covered with fleas.
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« Reply #1 on: June 19, 2017, 10:26:42 PM »

I really like the way this was written. Apparently this is also your 420th post as well! Cheers!
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« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2017, 03:27:13 AM »

Than you. I've writen a song about giants and the topic seems to get the juices flowing.
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