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Dreobject
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« on: October 08, 2018, 10:55:08 AM »


A trail of smoke swirled skyward in a lazy drift, meandering like water down a small stream bed. She squints her eyes a fraction, and purses her lips as she moves the cigarette close to her with the grace of having performed the same action thousands of times. A gentle draw, and a full inhale, and then a tip of the head backwards. From her mouth the smoke takes the form of rings, one, then a smaller two, and then a smaller three. The tobacco aromas are intoxicating, and her allure makes it even more so. Between drags, she sits calmly, and her lips when not pursed are round and full. I want to taste the tobacco on them.
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« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2018, 12:08:33 PM »

Just a simple drag of a cigarette, very precise and beautifully put. Well done!
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« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2018, 08:27:34 AM »

I want a cigarette now!!
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