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« on: December 05, 2018, 02:13:28 PM »

Write about the object or subject using your sense based faculties; Taste, Touch, Sight, Sound, Smell as well as your kinesthetic senses - movement and body sensations. Set your stop watch and write for ten minutes - EXACTLY!

A heavy metal late night door thrown open into the city street. Once beautiful girls stream out, falling over themselves, glitter still in their tangled hair, a rising maniacal laughter of people who aren't really here. The bright California sun hits them and they need to shield their eyes. Still smelling of acrid booze and sweat mixed with sweet perfume, they are caught off guard by the morning sun. No longer rising, but solid in her stance. Confused glances are passed between them, eyebrows raised. A woman on her way to work gives them a large birth. Carrying their heels because it feels like knives are sticking up into the arches, it is decided by their rolling but very flat tummies that breakfast is needed. As they begin to walk, they hold tight to each other. Soft hands in soft hands. To help steady their wobbling steps and also to stand together against the working class crowd, no woman left behind.
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