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This week's words;

Sunday - Instructions

Monday- Motorcycle

Tuesday- Wildflower

Wednesday- Asparagus

Thursday- Stopwatch

Friday - Confetti

Saturday-Homesick



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marksy
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« on: June 13, 2019, 11:35:56 PM »

Bitter scented toxic air forcing my head to recoil, feeling my eyes close in protest, chemicals dancing in the air and accosting my palate. The rainbow of colours lining the wall, the gambit of eye popping shades enticing my eyes into a daze. Deep reds flowing and torrenting, a river gushing dangerously, hot and raging in white noise and a deep low whirring. Light blues gently hovering, trickling and tinkling and dancing and twirling, cold. Greens floating airborne, wafting upwards, thick and translucent, peaceful and calm, pines drifting through the air and calming me, whispers of tree birds, giggling and chatting. Warm yellow sun bathing me, stretching its long limbs out through gaps and holes…
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« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2019, 06:51:01 AM »

I like how you made the colours come alive, a nice trip! the way you started off the rainbow was cool imagery "the gambit of eye popping shades enticing my eyes into a daze"
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« Reply #2 on: June 15, 2019, 11:58:09 PM »

@Sarchen - Thank you! I went a little abstract with this one  Grin
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