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Eloisenm
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« on: June 15, 2019, 12:42:36 PM »

When you're in the arms of love hovering above its safety net on a tightrope made of steel thick as the state of New York you can hear them. When you're plummeting down in your own self doubt cradled by the hands that will guide you on to a path of self-worth and kindness, you can hear them. They even sound over the shouts that rattle the walls of your home, over the cries of being misunderstood and learning that not all lessons are easy. They echo through the chambers of your broken reasoning, the excuses you create to keep walls in place, a barricade against pain. It's a gentle tolling that does not charge for the unconditional faith you lay upon each other, the resounding strength like 50 m deep pylons buried within rock and raising up into an unbreakable mountain of steel and glass running with currents without insulation turning the mountain into a radiant star on earth. The eyes that fall upon it are warm and not burned, welcoming the radiant glow like a new morning. The bells ring, a union of sound reverberating with the chorus of voices celebrating two families...


Man, I really hated this one haha.
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« Reply #1 on: June 15, 2019, 09:08:33 PM »

We're our own worst critic.

"They echo through the chambers of your broken reasoning"

That's a powerful line.
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