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marksy
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« on: June 17, 2019, 12:40:07 AM »

A yellow and golden soft and hot steaming land of protein, dappled with white creamy milky textures. Flora residing with the bouncing soft eggs, a land of multi coloured vegetables, like shrubbery red and grey, hidden and occluded, subsumed into the formed omelet, frozen in time. Cracks and explosions of pepper corns leave trails of debris, like bombs exploding on my palate, garnishing and reacting with the acidic orange juice laying dormant from minutes earlier. A vibrant mix of soft smells wafting by, hanging by my head, forcing salivation. Salt cracking and explosion, crunching and grinding like stepping on the cracked brown old leaves of autumn lying freely without loyalty outside. The glass panel fogging, as I stare out to the road, steam rising from the omelet turning the window from transparent to translucent. A

A hungover brain doesn't work as well as it should  Grin
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« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2019, 05:52:07 PM »

Excellent descriptions.  Really liked the "cracks and explosions of pepper corns".  Did repeat it a few lines later with the salt.  Maybe from the hangover???   Cheesy
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« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2019, 11:25:40 PM »

@Mattvs86 - Thank you! Haha, yes you are quite right. I blame the hangover  Grin
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« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2019, 07:26:22 PM »

Very colourful! I really liked it. I love peppery bombs!
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« Reply #4 on: June 18, 2019, 11:13:30 PM »

@plamb Thank you! Smiley
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