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This week's words;

Sunday - Instructions

Monday- Motorcycle

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AvailableBeat
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« on: September 10, 2019, 11:40:55 AM »

I get more of a kick out of an entree of metaphor than I do scrawling description. All ten minutes spent really tasting different combinations. So, today mine is short.

Lagoon
I lounged in the lagoon of your eyes. Drifting out of consciousness against your stares languid lap. The candlelit waves of cool affection over an iris-green reef. The laughter of dishes lying before patrons in the jungle somewhere out of my sight. The cityscape grating moonlight across the table.
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« Reply #1 on: September 10, 2019, 06:22:33 PM »

cool, I especially like 'I lounged in the lagoon of your eyes' .. awesome
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« Reply #2 on: September 10, 2019, 11:38:01 PM »

Thanks! Im glad you dig it.  Cheesy
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