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This week's words;

Sunday - Instructions

Monday- Motorcycle

Tuesday- Wildflower

Wednesday- Asparagus

Thursday- Stopwatch

Friday - Confetti

Saturday-Homesick



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marksy
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« on: October 31, 2019, 06:09:51 AM »

Cool late spring breeze rolls like waves onto the front porch of my house, barrelling against my house-warm legs, hackles raising on my neck in chills like small fleeting rolling hills. Whispy feathery soft but sticky fake spiderweb undulating and dancing in the breeze, warm honey sunlight oozing down the front of the house. Chattering and miniature bellows of laughter ping pong in great distances round the neighbourhood like racing cars, careening hearts and legs thudding spinning in swirling afternoon light, mystical and mysterious like halloween. Doorbells ringing are a cacophony of church bells and town halls blossoming on the hour of dusk, gleaming faces beaming at sweets and chocolates, white noise foil wrapping shivering in cold hands. Puffy smooth chocolate river turned bitter and raging in my mouth. Doorstep sticky and percussive like velcro, dried hard sugar smells like cooling moltenů
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« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2019, 07:14:17 PM »

Mmm, some great imagery going on here.
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« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2019, 09:59:31 PM »

Thank you Higgs!
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« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2019, 02:03:51 PM »

Really nice - I am there... Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2019, 11:26:49 PM »

Thanks Jas! Smiley
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