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J.Paul Lake
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« on: December 26, 2011, 03:58:01 PM »
The sound of sweetness echoes down to the ocean floor
I float to the top, then I sink like a rock thrown overboard
A great bright light electrifies the sea
A lightning bolt strikes down on me

It saved my soul when I lost control
It gave me hope that I never did know

Before the storm I set out to ignore all empathy
The further I swam from my homeland, I couldn't see
But I just told myself it was right of me to leave
Until a tidal wave crashed down on me

Oh, God struck me down with sounds of thunder
No, don't let me drown but hold me under
I need to see what makes me stronger
Here, so lost at sea, a lightning bolt struck down
On me
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