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Author Topic: Is this lyric or not  (Read 1926 times)
ArtyRedsocks
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love those words


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« on: June 01, 2012, 10:06:46 AM »

Firstly - it would be great if Enriko's garbage was removed off this area.

had an open mic up the country a month ago and was explaining Show dont Tell to some locals - the following song was made up on the spot to try and explain the concept. Interestingly, having now played this live around 7 times, it works exceedingly well
sound is at

http://soundcloud.com/arty-redsocks/naked-in-a-motel-room-2

V1
Put her best dress on, make up, perfume and silk stockings
Ch
She spent the night laying naked in a motel
V2
When her waters broke, knew she'd never make it down to Utah
Ch
She spent the night laying naked in a motel


The two interesting aspects, - the attention the song gets and discussion as to what the song is about, Bride, Prostitute, First Date, Prom are just some of the protaginist people have the subject as, the second aspect is that many people do not regard it as a song because it is not long enough and I have not given enough information to make a song.

Interested in your opinions good peoples


Arty
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