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This week's words;

Sunday - Instructions

Monday- Motorcycle

Tuesday- Wildflower

Wednesday- Asparagus

Thursday- Stopwatch

Friday - Confetti


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Author Topic: Is this lyric or not  (Read 2201 times)
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« on: June 01, 2012, 10:06:46 AM »

Firstly - it would be great if Enriko's garbage was removed off this area.

had an open mic up the country a month ago and was explaining Show dont Tell to some locals - the following song was made up on the spot to try and explain the concept. Interestingly, having now played this live around 7 times, it works exceedingly well
sound is at


Put her best dress on, make up, perfume and silk stockings
She spent the night laying naked in a motel
When her waters broke, knew she'd never make it down to Utah
She spent the night laying naked in a motel

The two interesting aspects, - the attention the song gets and discussion as to what the song is about, Bride, Prostitute, First Date, Prom are just some of the protaginist people have the subject as, the second aspect is that many people do not regard it as a song because it is not long enough and I have not given enough information to make a song.

Interested in your opinions good peoples

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