"Love Sparks" by Sean Payton (Ideas for Song Lyrics)

[Seanpayton86]

This is an idea I have for song lyrics. It is the first verse. Thoughts and comments are welcome:

By Sean Payton: "Love Sparks"

A river flows, my heart desires,
My baby's love spark.
That girl lit my fire.
Dead ambers sigh. . . .tragedy.
The current without you, a bad case, Dejavu
like Usher says, just let it Burn, Ambers try to heal & I never learn,
1 flame walks alone, the new current takes me,
Hard to see underwater, I need your sparks of love to guide me....Love Sparks -SP

[FreddyD]

Hi Sean,

In my opinion you are off to a good start.  I want to hear what comes next.  If you don't know what you want to say in lyric form yet, maybe you could try and write the idea out in prose. I want to say this...and then brainstorm on it for 10 minutes or so.

Good luck to you!