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This week's words;

Sunday - Instructions

Monday- Motorcycle

Tuesday- Wildflower

Wednesday- Asparagus

Thursday- Stopwatch

Friday - Confetti

Saturday-Homesick



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Trigo
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« on: June 19, 2013, 02:08:00 AM »

Life's an understated railroad
it's hard to move on by foot
but you just have to catch the right train.
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Mott
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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2013, 03:51:39 PM »

I'll take a stab at this.  I'm trying to work on my skills with metaphors.

I'll admit I took more than 5 minutes to do this.  Sorry.  Next time I'll stick to the 5-minute rule and maybe try to write a sentence for whatever metaphors I come up with.

I tried to incorporate the 7 senses Pat Pattison talks about: sight, smell, hearing, taste, touch, organic (outward bodily actions), and kinesthetic (inward body feeling; relation of self to surroundings).
Life is a green explosion.
Life is a fragrant water.
Life is God's echo.
Life is a sweet and sour century.
Life is an icy clock.
Life is a crawling giant.
Life is a spinning tree.
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KamanchiD
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« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2014, 12:58:10 PM »

Some nice stuff there.

How about: Life is the souls prelude in the opus of eternity
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