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Out -of-bounds object writing exercise 10 mins

admin January 26th, 2008

 ooooh a toughie today…not so ‘objecty’Out of bounds, as soon as I hit it I knew that’s where it was headed. That small white dot mangled by a sledgehammer left hook to the upper body. Now sailing , a satellite, in it’s own orbit , a Sputnik with no hairy aerials, no wires and no remote control, heading towards the bathroom mat of fur on the left.

Walking through knee high grass, searching, grasses, pleading for freedom, grabbing at my knees like I’m some sort of saviour that can let them go. Covering the ball to make me stay  a little bit longer. It’s dry as a river bed here, the  golden straws need a drink badly. The ball reveals itself,  sitting up in this nest of grass like a little egg. I cautiuoulsy lift it from its position, the grasses make a  final attempt at grappling with my clothes . I shake them off.

The ball rolls on the ground like it’s just come down a lottery shoot on the smooth carpet of green. I taste boiled egg as the club arcs through the ball, a happy golf club smile of an arc. Perfect! I think of ‘crazy golf ‘ as the plateau of the green gets nearer, those luminescent green fake grass matts, and holes placed at bizzare angles where the concrete has been poured such a way that the ball rolls away at the last moment. Bolts of frustration slide into catches.

[ I think this is a bit too ‘commentary’ for my liking I did get some sense stuff in there]

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